Read the passage.

There I was clinging to the side of the cliff. Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, I heard a familiar cawing sound. I looked up to see a suspicious seagull circling overhead. Yep, you guessed it. Kerplop!

The underline sentence was added while revising the draft. Which revision was done to the paragraph?


a A detail was added to create urgency to the conflict.

b A detail was added to connect a new event to the conflict.

c A detail was added to establish facts basic to the conflict.

d A detail was added to clarify the resolution of the conflict.


20 points to who ever answers it