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Most people think that the more people use public transportation the better, it is not the case all the time because there are advantages and disadvantages. There are three reasons for use of public transportation one advantage and two disadvantages.

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Can you show me a proper way to write the paragraph above if there needs to be changes and corrections?

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The paragraph can be rewritten as follows:

  • Most people think that the more people use public transportation the better. It is not the case all the time because there are advantages and disadvantages. There are three reasons for use of public transportation; one advantage and two disadvantages.

What is the problem with the paragraph?

The problem with the paragraph above is basically about the use of punctuation. We can see that the full stop and the semicolon were not used in some appropriate places to indicate a pause or the introduction of an important idea.

In the first sentence, the full stop should have been used to separate the two independent clauses with distinct ideas. In the last sentence, the semicolon should have been used to show the three reasons for the use of public transportation.

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