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Read the passage from instructions for making tree
rubbings.
Making tree bark rubbings is a great way to identify a
tree without harming it. Find some wax crayons to
create the rubbing. You can use leftover pieces of
broken crayons, which helps reuse, reduce, and
recycle household objects. Use medium-weight plain
white paper so you can see the most details in the
finished rubbing.
O Making rubbings of tree bark can be a lot of fun.
0 Find crayons to create the rubbing.
You can use leftover pieces of broken crayons.
O Use medium-weight plain white paper.