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Review your diary entry and revise one section to add more dialogue, description, or sensory language. Type your revision below.

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I would include dialogue between the forest ranger and Adelle's father: He asked the ranger, "Have you seen any bears?" The ranger laughed, gave me a reassuring smile as though he knew why we were asking, and replied, "No one's seen a bear in this area in over five years!" I wonder if he could see the terror in my eyes.

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Sample Response: I would include dialogue between the forest ranger and Adelle's father: He asked the ranger, "Have you seen any bears?" The ranger laughed, gave me a reassuring smile as though he knew why we were asking, and replied, "No one's seen a bear in this area in over five years!" I wonder if he could see the terror in my eyes.