FAST 100 POINTs

02.09 The Final Touches
Part 1: The Rough Draft (20 points)
In the space below, paste the completed five-paragraph rough draft of your problem and solution essay about vultures, Komodo dragons, or jellyfish.




Part 2: The Final Draft (40 points)
Revise your rough draft by making improvements to your syntax, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and formal language and by incorporating feedback from your instructor. After making these edits and revisions, paste the final draft of your essay below. (40 points)

Champion's Checklist—Use the checklist to confirm that you've completely revised your problem and solution essay.
• Syntax
I have reviewed and revised sentence structure and varied sentences by using interesting first words, combining short sentences, and flipping sentences.
• Spelling
I have reviewed and revised errors in spelling, especially homonyms like "to, too, two," "your, you're," and "their, they're, there."
• Capitalization
I have reviewed and revised proper capitalization of the first word in each sentence, names, places, and titles.
• Punctuation
I have reviewed and revised mistakes in punctuation, making sure that each sentence ends with the proper punctuation mark and commas are placed appropriately.
• Formal Language
I have reviewed and revised informal language. My essay does not include my opinion, first-person pronouns like "I" and "you," slang, contractions, or abbreviations.