(1) Having dreams and goals in you’re life is important because it motivates you to try harder. (2) For instance, I have set the goal of being able to do five pull-ups. (3) Even though five pull-ups may not sound like very many, it is four more than I can do now. (4) Since I set this goal. (5) I have been working on my pull-ups every day. (6) Setting the goal motivated me. (7) I bet you I will be able to crank out five pull-ups in no time!

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